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BUILDING NETWORKS IN BELLEVILLE

By Hye Won Seo


An important way to get a good job in Canada is to build networks.

My husband, two children and I came to Belleville from Korea in 2003. My husband, Yoon Do, had already applied to Loyalist College. That was the reason why we chose to live in Belleville.

By the time we came to Canada, he had already learned the importance of Canadian educational networks. He had researched on the internet and found a college which provides a 2 year course in his subject. It was the shortest one in Ontario, and that was what he wanted because he already had a Masters degree. He didn't want to waste time and money. He just wanted to build his own educational network in a very short time.

He also realized that he needed to build a social network in Canada. He chose a Canadian church and got involved in a small Bible study group, even though he couldn't speak English well. It was the best way to make Canadian friends.

After graduation, he applied for jobs all over Ontario. However, we had already bought a house in Belleville and our children were getting used to going to school here. If possible, we preferred to get a job in Belleville. In general, most companies don't usually advertise job openings to the public, so it isn't easy to get your foot in the door. It was very difficult to get information about job openings.

One day, one of our church friends came over and informed Yoon Do of a job opening at Bioniche. He immediately applied to Bioniche and got the job.

From our experience, I would say, building networks is the most important way to get a job as newcomers.

Hye Won Seo is a student in Barbara Dick's class at Loyola, Belleville. She also wrote he following short, short story as a very imaginative response to a class lesson on using modals, and it seems to me that she has recounted an incident that occurs all too often in our lives! Look for the modals in the story below.


An Embarrassing Incident
by Hye Won Seo

I have had many embarrassing incidents in my life. One thing I remember, when I was in Grade 9, I went on a school trip to another city by train. I was talking about my teacher with my friends on the train. We thought we were alone, and we were gossiping about our teacher. Then we realized that our teacher was behind us! He must have heard our gossiping about him. We felt like we could have died. But he didn't say anything. He just smiled at us. He might not have heard anything.

Anyway, we should have been talking more quietly and carefully. In fact, we shouldn't have been gossiping at all!


 

The following three stories are the winners of the Winter Writing Contest at Queen's School of English. The authors are clearly ambitious and talented writers!


No Country for Foreign Men
by Hoony Seonghoon Bong (First Place Winner)

"What a nice anniversary!" She said to her husband hysterically.

"Would you please calm down? I'm trying to do my best, and I'm also exhausted exactly like you." He almost yelled at her.

"I told you over and over that I just wanted regular travel. Like a normal package trip! But you decided by yourself again as you always do. Look at us. Finally, we’re lost. There's no phone, no water and not even any road signs. I’m here to relax not to wander around a totally strange place! I'm really sick of you, Gerald!"

"Who wanted to go to India? Did I? Did I? If you didn't choose this stupid country, it definitely wouldn’t have happened to us. I'm not the one who picked India. It's you! Cynthia! I wanted to go to Cuba. Moreover, you wanted to take a bus today. We should have got a cab!"

"Here we are... The only problem we've had is that you can't see your problems. You don’t even want to see. You've never admitted your faults. Never! You know what? You're pathetic. You're never going to realize your problems. Now, I feel sorry for you"

Gerald thought about something for a while and said calmly;

"You are right. I won't deny my fault any more, but this is not a good time for a quarrel. It makes a bad situation worse. We have to go through this together. You got it?"

"O.K, I'm just afraid. The sun is going down, Gerald, and we don't know even where we are."

"I know that, Cynthia, but we'll be fine..."

"We haven't seen any people or any cars at all since two hours ago. What can we do now?"

Gerald tried to encourage her, but his lethargic voice made her start crying, and her sad eyes with tears made him more depressed. They could no longer keep talking. About two hours later, they’re still walking around the same spots that they had already passed. The sun was almost down, and darkness was coming quickly. The dark made her shiver. Hour after hour, the darker the place she was in, the more afraid she felt. She felt real fear that she hadn’t felt before. She started to give up everything, and said to him feebly.

"Though we can't go back to the hotel, I'll forgi..."

"That's not gonna happen! Let's think in a positive way..." He wanted to tell her more confidently, but also he couldn't be sure what would happen to them. About an hour later, She stopped to tie up her sneakers, and she saw something like lights from very far away.

"Gerald! Can you see that? Is that a light?"

"Oh! Those are head lights! A car is coming to us! We're surviving!"

"Oh my gosh! Stop the car!"

"See? I told you we'll be fine!" Gerald ran to the car, yelled joyfully, and shook his arms at the car that was coming to him. In spite of his big gesture, the car narrowly passed him, and it made him to fall down roughly. The only thing that he could do was stare at the car's back with his dull face.

"Maybe Jesus deserted us..." Cynthia, staring at the car, dropped to her knees and muttered to herself desperately.

Then, the car suddenly hesitated, and stopped. The husband and wife ran toward the car. There was a middle aged Indian man in the dirty old car.

"Problem have?" the driver spoke to the couple in awkward English.

"Namaste, Can you speak English?" Gerald asked him gladly.

"Yes, but no well, no well."

As the driver answered slowly, she smiled at her husband with a sigh of relief. "We've been looking for the way to Varanasi all day long! But we don't even know where we are. Could you help us, please?" She excitedly said to the driver.

"Varanasi?"

It seemed that he didn't understand exactly what she said but at least he hear Varanasi.

"Yes. Yes, we’re going to Varanasi! If you drive us to there, I'll pay you enough money.” Gerald took his wallet out from his pocket and pointed at his pile of bills to the driver and said. "Take us to Varanasi. I'll give you this much."

The driver gazed at Gerald's hand that held the pile of bills and seemed to think.

The driver gave his hand to Gerald and said. "O.K, get in the car." Gerald and Cynthia were frightfully glad. They got into the car quickly. The inside of the car stank badly, but it was not problem for them. They just said to the driver that they really thanked him.

The driver smiled to them kindly, started drive, and said, "Calm down and relax. Varanashi is very far from here, so it will take a long time to get there."

"No matter how far it is, we don't care if we can get there. We are just thankful to meet you. You couldn’t even imagine how afraid we were." She, feeling calmer, said to the driver.

"I feel pity for you. I can see your pale face and fearful eyes although it's dark inside. I can guess how awful you spent today. Mrs..."

"McConnell. Just call me Cynthia. This is my husband Gerald, and you are..."

"Suresh."

"Thank you, Mr. Suresh. By the way, your English is quite good." Gerald said to him, but the driver didn't say anything. He just smiled again and kept driving.

"I'll make a phone call to Jacob and Paul as soon as I arrive the hotel room, Gerald. I really miss their voices..." She hugged her husband, began to cry again, and said, "... And I'm sorry that I spoke to you aggressively. I should have been nicer."

"No, You weren’t as bad as I was. I apologize to you." He kissed her forehead and whispered lowly, however his eyes were staring at the driver in the rearview mirror.

About thirty minutes passed. Her head was leaning on his left shoulder, and she slept deeply. He was also very tired and sleepy, but he didn't fall asleep. It was very quiet inside the car. The only thing that made noise was just some noise from engine. When ten minutes passed more, the car's speed decreased and soon stopped. Gerald was slightly surprised and asked the driver.

“What’s going on?”

“It’s not a big deal. Sometimes my car stops during the driving for no reason. It’s not unusual, don’t worry. As you can see, it’s very old.”

“That sound makes me uneasy.”

“Yes, but I need your help. Could you do me a favor?”

“Of course. Just say it.”

“Well, if you push my car, it’ll help to start it.”

“You want me to get off this car and push the back? Is that what you want?

“Exactly.”

He put her head on the seat and stepped out of the car, and it made her wake up. She asked him in between sleeping and waking.

“Did we arrive at the hotel, Gerald?”

“Not yet, but we’ll soon be there.” He answered shortly and got out of the car. It was very dark outside and quite cold, and the light wind was blowing gloomily. He thought that discovering the car had been a real fortune. On the other hand, he could feel some bad feeling, but he didn’t know why.

“Push at the three! O.K?” The driver opened the window and yelled. He put his hands on the car’s backside to push the car, and shouted more loudly.

“I got it!”

“O.K! One. Two. Three!” As he started to push, the car started to go by itself.

“Now, working!” The driver shouted. Gerald smiled and walked toward the car to get in.

"What luck! I didn’t even push... Did it fix itself?" He thought. At that moment, the car began to run and then drove away from him very rapidly with a loud noise. He was very surprised, and it made him freeze. He just stood and watched the car disappear. When he realized the driver had kidnaped his wife, he couldn’t even see the car. The deep darkness surrounded Gerald. There were no street lamps, and he couldn’t see any other lights. Nobody was there, except him.

However, he felt mounting anger and terrible frustration instead of feeling fear. Cynthia didn’t have a cell phone or money. Moreover, she didn’t have any information about the hotel where they were staying. The only thing that she knew was just the hotel’s name. If the driver wanted to ask him to pay a ransom, there was no way to contact him. He thought that was biggest problem. He thought about whole properties that he owned and could pay for her. He started to run the way the car was going and started to cry. A bunch of possibility filled his head. A thought that tortured him worst was how he would tell their children if he failed to rescue her. He felt real sorrow.

When several hours passed, he could see some lights from cities. He ran to the city faster than he had run before. Soon he found some people and asked them to bring him to a police station. Fortunately, one of them, named Mohinder, could speak English, and he helped him. They went to a police station as quickly as possible. As he entered the station, he found an old detective who looked like the highest veteran named Zoushe. He told everything that happened to the couple to the detective, and Mohinder helped him by translating. The old detective, with a mild eye, told calmly; “The clues that you gave me are not enough. "

" I’m sorry to trouble you but, we can’t guarantee you that we can rescue her safely. Anyway, before we begin to look for your wife, I have ask you something to do. Please do not call the embassy. Sometimes it happens. Not usually. I mean the missing...or kidnapping... whatever... When it happens, if the damn embassy starts to interfere, the situation always gets worse. I can guarantee this. They don’t do anything helpful. They just sit on the fancy chair, and always order us what to do. They’ve really bugged us, so I want you not to call them. Could you follow my suggestion, please?"

It was a hard decision for him, but he had to do. He decided to accept the suggestion and wanted to believe that this was a reasonable choice. Eventually, the search was started by all the policemen in the district near the police station including Captain Zoushe with Gerald and Mohinder. Nevertheless, unfortunately, the first day they looked for her finished without certain results at midnight.

Four days passed. During the days, there wasn’t any message from the kidnapper to the hotel he has staying in or the police since she had been kidnapped. Gerald was very exhausted about everything. He gradually started to give up hope of finding her. He went back to the hotel room and took his first shower in India. He thought that he would be glad if everything that he was going through was dream. Terrible guiltiness pressed him cruelly. He looked around the room on the bed. The baggage without its owner made him stared to cry. His tears dropped on the floor. If Cynthia were here, she would wipe the tears on his cheek with her sweet hanky tenderly. Suddenly, the phone’s ringing filled his empty room. He picked up the phone quickly. It was Captain Zoushe. He said that it seemed they had found his wife with the kidnapper’s car and maybe the suspect left them on purpose. He asked her safety first, but he spoke the location of her and the car instead of replying his question. He put on a jacket rapidly and went away from the hotel.

When he arrived, many police officers were patrolling around the scene. Some barricades were set up around the car that she sat in, and a crowd surrounded them with noise. With the sight, he started to really feel that it was really happening to him. He clenched his teeth.
Captain Zoushe and Mohinder came to him with a troubled look, and he knew already what they’re going to tell to him. “I warn you strongly. You’d better not see her. It’ll be possible to identify her by her stuff. You don’t have to see...” The captain said to him, but he ignored what he said and passed him without saying anything.

Cynthia’s body was laid on the back seat with no clothing in the car. A big white piece of cloth stained with blood, that seemed like hers, covered her pale, cool body. Her eyes were closed without eyeballs, and some straws were held between the eyelids. Her upper body was carved by something knife shaped from the chest to the belly, and the inside of the body was also filled with piles of straws. There was no heart, kidneys or liver. He couldn’t move even slightly and felt a strong vertigo with the horrible sight. He flopped on the ground and tried to collect his mind, but soon he fell into a faint.

 

The United States ' Struggle for the National Identity
by Momoko Takanobu (Second Place Winner)

Who will be the next American president? Hillary Clinton, Barack Obama or John McCain? People in the United States are now wildly excited at the dead heat of the Democratic Party’s preliminary election, debating each candidate’s policy with fascination. Americans are generally disputatious and they really like the word “justice”. They always argue enthusiastically on various topics, like abortion, same-sex marriage and religious education in public schools. Both pro side and con side strongly believe that they are promoting real “justice”. That is why some of them even rush into radical actions such as when pro-life activists actually attacked abortion clinics.
And the United States’ concern is not limited to their domestic matters. They try to establish their “justice” in every region of the world like Afghanistan, Iraq and Iran. They have such a strong feeling of responsibility as the world’s “policeman” that they cannot hear other people crying, “We did not ask you for your help”. In fact the United States started the controversial Iraq War in the name of “justice”. Why are they so passionate, desperate, and sometimes even frantic to pursue “justice”?

A great book which provides a clue to think about this question is Koichi Mori’s “America in the Context of Religion (Shukyo Kara Yomu America)”(1996). The author points out that the United States was constructed mainly by Puritans who protested against corrupt European Christians and moved to the North American continent from the 17th to the 18th century. And as a result, Americans have the distinct feeling that they are “chosen people”, in addition to having a keen sense of human rights and a strong sense of mission. On the other hand, the United States is, in a sense, an artificial nation consisting of such immigrants, Native Americans and former-slaves. They have no common history and, because of that, their only way to be linked with each other is to believe in the same ideal for the future. That is why they really want to know what principle their country is based on and what ideal or “justice” they should share. Koichi Mori calls this a passion for “national identity”.

His analysis of American people’s tendency in relation to their origins is impressive. In an extreme instance, they might be not really interested in detailed domestic and foreign policies, like abortion, same-sex marriage, religious education and the Iraq war. They are just starving for a real answer to the questions; “What is our national identity?”, “Why are we in the same country?” or “Where should we go in the future?” It is as if they would be soon broken apart unless they found the right answer
This American desperation for identity reminds me of a famous movie, “Blade Runner”(1982), directed by Ridley Scott, the story of which is a battle between four insurgent androids called Replicants and one human counterinsurgent called Blade Runner. The Replicants, whose life time is designed for only four years, are always protecting their “childhood photographs”. But their “childhood photographs” actually are not real, because androids have no past.
Humans gave them to stabilize their minds. It is thought that every higher creature needs its past to keep it sane. The insurgent Replicants killed many humans in cold blood in the course of asking their inventor where they were from and how long they could live. They were definitely brutal and sadistic towards humans, but I could not help feeling pain for their desperation. They sought the meaning of their artificially designed, limited life, by questioning where they came from, where they would go and how long they could live, with their old fake photographs clasped in their hands.

It is easy to blame the United States. There was no evidence of weapons of mass destruction on Iraq War. The American government probably has no absolute “justice”. In the first place, there is no perfect rightness and no perfect wrongness in the world.

However, can we laugh at their convulsive struggle to seek a common ideal, which might be a phantom? Can we ridicule their frantic fruitless efforts to seek their identity, which probably just results in causing others trouble?

Each nation has a unique background and a special fate, just as each person does. I cannot help feeling sympathetic understanding for their foolish behavior. They are just struggling against their destiny. Of course it is true that they should sincerely respect every other culture by placing themselves in others’ positions. However, at the same time, it is productive for us to imagine what it would be like if we were American.

No one knows where we come from and where we are going to. However, we can learn something from others’ foolishness. I believe this is the first step toward making our uncertain and ephemeral world more reliable, more meaningful and more ideal.

 

Dreams: Novel Analysis of Margaret Atwood’s Alias Grace
by CeCe Chu Cheng (Third Place Winner)
Alias Grace, Margaret Atwood’s ninth novel, was first published in 1996. The story is based on Grace Marks, a real nineteenth century Canadian woman who was accused of and spent thirty years in jail for the murder of two people. While she was in jail, there was a doctor named Simon Jordan, who tried to find out whether she had lost her memory completely and if he could prove her innocence. Unfortunately, because of Dr. Jordan’s own affair with his landlady, he felt guilty about his behavior; he gave up Grace’s case. By the end of the novel, Grace was released from jail and had a good life.
Alias Grace has been one of Margaret Atwood's famous novels, which became a bestseller in North America, Europe, and in other countries around the world. This novel helped Atwood win several literary prizes, including the Norwegian Order of Literary Merit, Salon Magazine’s Best Fiction of 1997, and the Canadian Booksellers Association's Author of the Year Award. Atwood had wonderful descriptions about some characters' dreams in the novel which are very important to build the characters and indicated the characters' capacity for good and bad. The dreams also indicate the real murderer. The main character Grace's dreams give audience perspicuous images about her innocence and her personality.

Atwood had lots of descriptions of her characters’ dreams in order to help to build those characters' personalities. Grace is a successful example of this. Her dreams give the audience main ideas about her character and background. Every time Dr. Jordan came to visit Grace, he asked Grace to describe her dreams, because he thought the images in her dreams might be helpful in this case. Actually, most of Grace's dreams are about the memories of her life. At beginning of chapter 40, Grace said she dreamt that she was walking with Mr. Kinnear, who was her employer, on the way home. There was someone in the house waiting to welcome them back, and she said:" Only it was not Nancy, but Mary Whitney who was waiting; and I felt so happy, to know I would see her again, restored to health and laughing, as she was before…but I had a great yearning towards this house, for it was my real home." Those images demonstrate that in Grace's mind, she thought the real home for her was where she could live with Mary. Mary was the most important person in her memory, because the time she spent with Mary was the happiest period in her life. Following Grace’s dreams, the audience can see that her biggest wish was having a real home and a happy life. Furthermore, in Chapter 27, she told Dr. Jordan that she dreamt about "red flowers" and walking "outside in the yard". She said: " I said that they were red flowers, and quite large, with glossy leaves like a peony. But I did not see that they were made of cloth." The things which Grace dreamt were normal things that most girls dreamt of. She had nothing different from other girls in her dreams, although she had been judged as a criminal. Grace’s dreams show people that as a teenaged girl with a poor family background, she also has a kind heart and pure soul. All of her hopes, as the audience can find out from her dreams, were to have a normal and good life.

Dreams are also used by Atwood to portray Dr. Jordan. Those dreams indicated this character's capacity for good and bad. Dr. Jordan, as a physician, in that particular time, always had a good reputation in people's mind. But people could not realize how bad his was inside. While he was asking about Grace's dreams and knowing the dreams were the real thoughts of her mind, he also dreamt. But all of his dreams were about sex, and audience can feel his sexual restraint. For example, in Chapter 17, he dreamt he was a boy at his old house. He describes: " It was a secret world, one as a boy he wasn't supposed to explore…In his ears, he hears a ringing, a faint and shivery laughter; and then many hands caress him." Those descriptions show how he was interested in women, even when he was a young boy.

But at the end of the dream he said: “A dead hand. His father, in the sinuous process of coming back to life. He has an overwhelming sense of having transgressed." Finally, his dead father came out and interrupted his dirty dream.

Another example in Chapter 22 that he dreamt is: "He tugs it down and it falls across his face, and then he understands that is isn't cloth at all but hair, the long fragrant hair of an unseen woman, which is twining around his neck. He struggles, he is being closely embraced; he can scarcely breathe. The sensation is painful and almost unbearably erotic." His dreams were all about sex and women. Because of his position, nobody would realize how dirty and repressed he was. He acted as a normal and good person in the day time, but he dreamt scandalous things at night. It became harder and harder for him to control himself. In Chapter 42, Dr. Jordan could not control himself anymore, and he had sex with his landlady while he was dreaming. His own sexual restraint did not work at all. His affair broke his good reputation in public; thus, he ran away without finishing Grace's case. Actually, Dr. Jordan was a hypocrite, as Grace pointed out in Chapter 48 while she was in her neuron-hypnotic session. Atwood shows Dr. Jordan's character through his dreams, but she also gives the audience the ideas about his capacity for inappropriate behavior.

Moreover, Atwood also uses dreams to indicate who the real murderer of Nancy was, which should have been Mary Whitney. In Chapter 48, Dr. Jordan and a colleague decided to do a neuron-hypnotic session on Grace. Mary spoke out in the neuron-hypnotic session. She said that she killed Nancy and Grace knew nothing about it. Then Dr. Jordan asked "whether she ever had relations with James McDermott." Mary said: "Really, Doctor, you are such a hypocrite! You want to know if I kissed him, if I slept with him. If I was his paramour! Is that it?" Such speech would never come from Grace, because that was not her personality at all. By Dr. Jordan's analysis, that was called dedoublement .

" It may be a case of what is known as dedoublement - the subject, when in a somnambulistic trance, displayed a completely different personality than when awake, the two halves having no knowledge of each other." (Chapter 49)
Actually, Grace mentioned that Mary Whitney appeared in her dreams several times. Once was sometime before Nancy's death. In Chapter 35, she said: "That night Mary Whitney appeared to me in a dream." Mary told her how she would kill Nancy, and that dream happened even before the event. That means it was Mary who wanted to kill Nancy, but not Grace. She appeared in Grace's dream to tell her what she was going to do, because she was going to use Grace's body. She chose to inhabit the body of Grace, because Grace was her best friend, and also because Grace forgot to open the window to let her soul out after she died. The dream and neuron-hypnotic session prove that Grace was innocent. She actually had two persons in her brain; one was herself, the other was Mary Whitney.

Dreams are very powerful methods which had been used in Alias Grace by Margaret Atwood. The characters' dreams run though the whole story. Describing the details which appeared in the dreams is a useful way to express the main characters' personalities. They gave the audience a different angle at which to view the characters, such as Dr. Simon Jordan, who was an actually dark person inside of his heart. The dreams also help readers to realize the real murderer was Mary Whitney, because of the double consciousness in Grace's brain and the multiple personalities in Grace's body. Dreams are used very successfully in this novel by Atwood. They made both the characters and the story alive. Alias Grace is a valuable novel to recommend to adults; it will give people good messages of viewing others from different angles, and remind readers that appearance does not necessarily represent a person’s real mind.

 

Feel like travelling? Try a little armchair journey......................to Paris, France!

Let Antoine be your guide, and all you'll need is your imagination.
Welcome to Paris.

If you are coming to Paris you will want to see the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre and the Opera. You might want to go shopping in those luxury shops of the greatest street in the world, the Champs Elysées Avenue.

But why don’t you come with me to the real Paris?

First we will go to the Sacré Coeur and walk on this old Paris hill with those little streets. Then we are going to see the place of the famous movie “Amélie Poulain”. Don’t you think it’s a colourful place? You can see a lot of ethnicities and there is a variety of smells with various restaurants along the street.

Here we are! Barbés! This place is the melting pot point of Paris. Maghreb, Africa, Asia are mixed all together in this fabulous place. You are probably hungry now. Let’s go into this Moroccan restaurant to eat a great Tagine. After this meal a walk will be great! Let’s go to the centre of Paris.

We are in the Marrais. It is the Jewish area but also the gay place. We are near the Place de La Bastille, where we executed our King. Let’s have a Mojito in a Latina bar before taking a taxi to the marvellous restaurant La Tour D’Argent in front of the Seine River where the Bateaux Mouches illuminate the building. Isn’t that beautiful? Enjoy Paris!

By Antoine Beyret
Pat Davis’s ESL Class at Open Book




TESL Kingston asked for student submissions on the topic, "What Canada Means to Me", to celebrate ESL Week, 2007. We are proud to present the contributions we received. Our sincere thanks to the teachers who sent in their students' contributions: Erin Kearney, St. Lawrence College; David Craig, KEYS, LINC 4,5 Class & LINC 3,4,5 Class; Michele Dean, Loyola Belleville's LINC 1,2 class and Sherry Archer, Loyola Belleville's LINC 3,4,5 class.

And of course, our heartfelt thanks to the students, who created such thought-provoking, moving stories, poems and art work to communicate their feelings about Canada. We plan to compile these into a booklet which we can distribute to the mayors of Belleville, Brockville and Kingston, in gratitude for their decisions to officially name the week of November 18th ESL Week in their respective municipalities. Copies will also be given to the various agencies who support our students in so many ways.

I find it fascinating to look at Canada through our students' eyes. It makes me appreciate my country in new ways. And as I listen to the courage and determination expressed in these stories, I realize all over again how fortunate we are to have such amazing people willing to endure such difficulties, and work so hard to become independent, self-supporting Canadians.

Susan Bain, Webmaster, TESL Kingston

What Canada Means to Me

The first time I heard about Canada, it was a big country whose people were quiet and relaxed. It also was peaceful and beautiful with maple leaves.

My ideas were totally changed when I arrived in Canada. At that time I felt perplex and difficult, because I had never independently lived in a place out of China. It made me nervous and scared because my English was not enough for communication. In addition, I was shy to talk to others. In that case, Canada is like the second home and this home was not warm.

I have made many good friends up to now, and they usually give me lots of associations. In addition, my English was improved a lot, so I was able to chat with Canadians. Also I am learning many skills which relate to housework. Life is a special culture we have to learn. So now Canada means to me a second home, and this home means becoming independent.

Sisi Yang
Erin Kearney's Class, St. Lawrence College


What Canada Means to Me

After lunch, I sitting outside and watching snow fall.
I feel grief while snow drops on my body.
No one wants to listen to me.
Listen to me narrate my past stories.

Pure white snow, pure red maple leafs.
Those delude me.
No one told me what I should do to make my life better.
I want to go back to past, I want to give up being here.
But that only brings me endless grief.

Someone said I should not think about the beautiful past at the moment.
How can the beautiful snow cover my mind?
Then I don’t need to think about the great past.

Suddenly, I realize
I shouldn’t think too much about past.
I ought to focus my life in the future.
Finally, the memory of the past is lost by dream of my future.
I seem to be a child who always falls down.
Have already forgotten the pain.
And understand how to disremember and value the past.

Tomorrow,
I will do the same thing-watching snow.
But you will see happiness and confidence appear on my face.

Fuzhi Kuang
Erin Kearney's Class, St. Lawrence College



What Canada Means to Me

“Canada” is just one word. But it has a lot of meaning for my husband and me. We came to Canada two years ago as immigrants. After 13 hours flying, we started our new life in Canada with 6 packages.

Since we told our families and friends that we decided to immigrate to Canada, “adventure” was the most frequent word that we heard from them. Our families said, “You don’t know anyone there, if something happened, we couldn’t help you.” Our friends worried whether we could find a job without any network. My uncle who had been to Australia for three years even told me “Emigration is not good for your marriage, I saw many people divorced or separated because of the pressure from life.” Anyway, we still came here with hope.

“New opportunity” is what I want to say after we have been here for two years. In Canada, I can go to school again no matter how old I am, and get a new job even totally different than my old job and background. I have a girlfriend who was an architect in our country. She was successful but she hated her job. After she came here, she told me that she would follow her dream this time. Now she is studying biochemistry in university.

Canada gives us new life and home. From the first day we came here, our life has changed a lot. We have our new house and car. That is a big difference from the packages that we had when we landed. My husband has a new job that he loves very much. I have improved my English a lot. I think I am almost ready to study a new program. We enjoy fishing, BBQ, yard work and so on in the summer, and even the snow and ice in the winter. We love the colorfully decorated fall and the green active spring

Xia Zhou
Erin Kearney's Class, St. Lawrence College



Canada

When I came down the airplane, I saw the maple leaves falling and withering just like my homesickness.
My tear flowed along my face trickled on the snow.
I think the happiness in the past is locked by the time.
I felt sad; I felt lonely; even can not see my own future.
Until now, Canada changed everything for me; gradually I felt my future holds limitless promise.
It gives me chances to imagine my future.
It gives me chances to arrive at my future.
It gives me safety to enjoy my life.
It gives me a nice place to study and live.
It gives me new ideas to make everything possible.
It gives me a lot of happiness and experiences, so I am never confused, where I am going to; where is my future.

Tao Li
Erin Kearney's Class, St. Lawrence College

 


The Magic in Canada

The blooms were fading
The red maple leaves were falling
The ground is covered by snow
It’s magic. The magic in Canada.

Grassy yesterday
Icy today
Warm yesterday
Freezing today
Green yesterday
Silver today
It’s magic. The magic in Canada.


Fresh air, blue sky
Friendly people, slow tempo
I flap wings and fly freely
It’s magic. The magic in Canada

Jou Yun Fan,
Erin Kearney's Class, St. Lawrence College

 

Canada Dream
Original Art work by Elly Kim, Erin Kearney's Class, St. Lawrence College

 

Canada-----Flying Free

Original Art Work by Melody Chen,
Erin Kearney's Class, St. Lawrence College



 

 


Nicola Thonpson sent along the following two entries from her elementary ESL students for the ESL Week 2007competition sponsored by TESL Ontario.   Both students are from Korea and are now attending school in Hastings and Prince Edward District School Board .

Danny Kim, Grade 6

Nancy You, Grade 7


Barbara Dick sent us this poster which was Sung Soo Park's entry for the TESL Ontario contest.. Sung Soo is also from Korea, and was being tutored by Barbara when the poster was done. He is now attending Grade 10 in the Belleville area.


Sung Soo Park, Grade 9

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What Canada Means to Me

I’ve been living in Canada for a short time, but my first impressions of it and its people have been very nice. People in Canada are very friendly and always want to help others.

One of the best things about this country, from my own point of view, is the freedom and opportunities that people have. No matter how strange you are, or how exotic your taste is, you can always find your own way to do what you like.

By Randy Domenick, Cuba

David Craig's Morning LINC 4-5 Class at KEYS


What Canada Means to Me

Before I came to Canada, I had no idea about where I wanted to go. I always heard it was a big cold country with extreme weather and long winters, but nothing more about the realities.

When I arrived in Canada and experienced everything myself, I found everything that I heard from others was different. The weather is marvelous. I love the summers, falls, winters and albeit short springs. I found it was a big country, and it is great.

Also, nobody talked about the people. I have found them to be very friendly, kind and helpful. But I needed more information after I settled. While I lived in Toronto, I tried to know more about Canada’s history, so I took a course about Canada’s history at a university. Hence, now I think I know more about it.

Now for me Canada is the land of beautiful things, the land of immigration, opportunity, nature and seasons. I especially enjoy that there are more seasons than in my home country.

By Kamyar Kamyab, Iran
David Craig's Morning LINC 4-5 Class at KEYS

What Canada Means to Me

Canada is a very peaceful place. I have free education, health care and a good life here. For my children and me, it is a good place to live. That is why I preferred to come to Canada .

Now I am very happy with my life in Canada . When I came to Canada , I met many Canadian people who helped me, like my LINC teacher and tutor.

After that, I liked the weather in Canada , except the winter. I like summer, fall and spring. They each have very beautiful weather, but the winter is very cold.

By J.G. , Somaliland
David Craig's Morning LINC 4-5 Class at KEYS

What Canada Means to Me

Canada is a beautiful and wonderful country. It has beautiful trees, flowers, many lovely animals, and the people are friendly too.

Canada is a very helpful country. It helps people when they need it, like with Ontario Works. It helps people to go to school and it helps disabled people. Canada has many wonderful programs to help immigrants too, like LINC at KEYS and ISKA.

Also, Canada’s laws are equal for everybody. In Canada no matter how old you are, you can go to school, college or university to study and get a job. Canada has many programs to help people when they have problems.

In Canada you feel happy. You can do what you like and what you want. You don’t need to worry so much. Here you have free medical care, so when you are sick, you don’t worry about having the money to see a doctor.

I love Canada. I feel very happy to live here. I feel confidence. I like the people here. I will improve my English, then go to college or university, then get a job or maybe have my own business. I will be friendly to people and help people if I can. I know I will be happy to work and enjoy my life here.

By Li Liu (Emily), China
David Craig's Morning LINC 4-5 Class at KEYS

What Canada Means to Me

Canada is a very developed country. I like this country because this country’s education is excellent. Also, the people are very good and the weather is different.

There are very valuable opportunities here. The economical condition is very high. Health, food and everything is very good here.

People from many different countries live in Canada. I feel better when I meet different kinds of people. Many people with different religions and many cultural backgrounds live in this country.

I am very happy to live in Canada.

By Nasima Begum, Bangladesh
David Craig's Morning LINC 4-5 Class at KEYS

What Canada Means to Me

I have been living in Canada for two years. I really like this country. Canada is a beautiful country. Niagara Falls, Thousand Islands are my favourite travel places. I like the blue sky, clean water, and fantastic maple trees here.

The Canadian government has very good welfare. As a new immigrant, I attend a free LINC class. I learn so much from it. But the most important thing is the government provides us with free medical care.

Also, the people here are so nice and friendly. You can get a lot of information and help.

If you study hard and work hard, you can get a very good life in Canada.

By Tian Su Si, China
David Craig's Afternoon LINC 3,4 & 5 Class at KEYS

What Canada Means to Me

For me, Canada is maybe almost my country because I’m Japanese, but I haven’t visited Japan for a little while, so I don’t have new information on Japan. I don’t know present Japan, and I feel not so close now.

Actually, I don’t sometimes know which country I belong to or where my country is. But two years ago, when I reached Toronto’s airport from Japan, I felt more comfortable than when I arrived at Japan’s airport last time. When I visited Japan I felt strange, so it must be that my country is more Canada, now.

I have lots of reasons to like Canada. I think most Canadians are kind and friendly, and there are many people who came from other countries as immigrants. This makes me comfortable and happy, because Japan is mostly Japanese only. For me, everything looks the same there—same skin colour, same culture and all the thinking is close to the same. This makes me feel like I have to be the same as everybody else when I’m there, but in Canada it is very different. After I came here, I felt more free. Sometimes I am not comfortable, because my face is not Canadian, and I don’t know enough English, but still I’m mostly comfortable. I like it here very much.

Some other things I like about Canada are the beautiful views, because of its large amount of land, lots of nice neighbours, and the old buildings in Kingston. I really like that I can see lots of sky because, here in Kingston, there
are not many high buildings. When I lived in Tokyo, each house was so close and there were lots of high buildings.

When I came here to Kingston, the first thing I noticed was the big open sky. Even now, I still enjoy looking at the views and the sky, almost every day.

By Tomoe Ichihara, Japan
David Craig's Afternoon LINC 3,4 & 5 Class at KEYS

What Canada Means to Me

Who can ever deny this indubitable, but real, fact that Canada is the best country to live in of all the countries of the world? In fact, there are lots of reasons for why Canada is the best, and why I came here.

The first and foremost reason is that Canada is a very stable country in all aspects, like for instance, political, financial, social and so on. The other reason that I chose Canada is because of my little child. Indeed, I want her to be brought up in a very good cultural and educational environment, and I don’t want to deprive her of the opportunities which lay ahead of her.

Furthermore, I would like to have peace of mind knowing that my family lives in a developed and peaceful country with a very good, very supportive government and of course very nice and helpful people.

Last, but definitely not least, is the climate in Canada. The weather is so nice. It has four seasons, and though the winter is very cold, I think it’s very beautiful, especially when the snow covers the whole land—it’s fascinating! Also, there is no air pollution, especially here in Kingston the air that we breathe is very clean. I’m grateful for this but also for so much more.

Finally, in my opinion, living in Canada is a very good opportunity for me and my whole family to flourish because opportunities to flourish in my country are very limited because of too many restrictions, so I think it is good to live in Canada, for sure.

By Sepand Salimi Vahid, Iran
David Craig's Afternoon LINC 3,4 & 5 Class at KEYS

What Canada Means to Me

Canada is the richest country in the whole world. The important thing to me about Canada is to become a Canadian citizen and to learn how to live where I am now, which is in Kingston.

What I feel about living here is pretty good. I live with my aunt, but I have some difficulties with communication with other people. I don’t get sometimes what they say to me, and they don’t understand me. It’s like I have a hard tongue!

I like people in Canada. They are very honest, always smile, are always on time, and if they promise to do something, they do it right away.

About climate, we have four seasons. They are spring, summer, fall and winter. I like fall the most. It is not too cold and not too warm.

About my opportunities, I want to go to school and take a P.S.W. course. Maybe if I finish it, I could help people who can’t manage for themselves anymore. I could do some errands, like get some groceries, go with them to appointments, help them take their baths, do some laundry, and feed them.

I hope I can make it into this course before the end of 2009. For now though, I love my job as a chambermaid, and they love me too.

By Medeline Vieja
David Craig's Morning LINC 4-5 Class at KEYS

What Canada Mans to Me


Canada is a nice country. For me it is very important because my daughter has lived here for a long time. She has a Canadian son and a very good Canadian husband.

Another thing is the government usually helps poor people and gives health care to everybody.

Canada is a big beautiful country and it has four seasons. I like the summer very much because I can go anywhere and enjoy the weather, flowers, trees, lakes and sunny days.

I’m glad to live in Canada. I love Canada, and I will never forget my first day when I came because it was wonderful. My daughter and my son-in-law gave me beautiful flowers. It was very nice. I will always remember that day.

By Marisela Suarez
David Craig's Morning LINC 4-5 Class at KEYS

What Canada Means to Me

Canada is a huge, wonderful country to me. When you get citizenship you will be able to have all the rights to do anything in this country. Canada has given me a very good and safe life.

I have been here for a long time, and I have seen many different people. Some of them are nice, some of them are mean, but that’s normal. Every country has the same kind of people.

Sometimes the weather is bad here and that’s why some people don’t like the weather in Canada. It is normal for me, though some people get very sick from the winter weather. They get depressed, fatigued, the flu and bad colds.

When I’m sick, I go to the emergency, but it takes a very long time to see the doctor. This situation makes me nervous. It is the thing that I don’t like about Canada. The best thing is the education here and that is very important for everyone.

By Hakamah Hussan (Hekmit), Yeman
David Craig's Morning LINC 4-5 Class at KEYS

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What Canada Means to Me


Canada is a wonderful country for living. It gives peace and safety. It’s the only country in the world that receives a lot of immigrant people from around the world.

Canada doesn’t make differences between people from Asia, Europe, Africa and Latin People. Canada respects our cultures, languages and religions. This country teaches us how we can live in peace, how to get along very well with one another.

Canada helps us to learn its culture, language with good schools, excellent teachers, and sometimes gives money to a lot of people for living.

The health care system is free for everybody – it is not perfect, but it is good.

In conclusion, Canada helps me in many ways to prepare better for getting a good job and having a good lifestyle. We can learn the culture step by step to help build the best place in the world.

By Margaria Pineda, Colombia
Sherry Archer's LINC 4-5 Class, Loyola, Belleville

I have been here in Canada four months. Actually, I’m here as a visitor. I’ll go back to Korea after eight months. My first purpose is to learn English. Secondly, I want to have experience from together cultures. I think Canada is the best place for that. Canada gives me many chances to learn English and Canada has many immigrants from other countries.

In my opinion, Canada is more polite than America. When I was on a trip in Europe, every American was rude and they were the only people making troubles. That’s my bad experiences about America. Before I came to Canada I thought Canadians might be the same (making messes, being rude). Since I have been here I haven’t met any rude person. They are very polite and kind. Until now, I had only good experiences about Canada.

If I planned to immigrate anywhere, my choice would be Canada. There is no doubt about that.

By Frank Lee, Korea
Sherry Archer's LINC 4-5 Class, Loyola, Belleville

I came to Canada because I married a Canadian. My husband was born in London, Ontario. Now, we live in Belleville, Ontario. We have three children. They were born in Canada. My children speak English every day, so I feel Canada is my home even though my side of the family isn’t living in this country.

My husband’s relatives live close to our house so we see them sometimes. They are nice to me. I like Canada because there are nice places to visit and we can enjoy nature throughout the year. But still, I feel cold in winter in Canada.

Yayomi Brennan, Japan
Sherry Archer's LINC 4-5 Class, Loyola, Belleville

What does Canada mean to me? I asked myself. To immigrate to Canada was my dream. I came to Canada with my husband and my son. We were too excited. We believed we were going to have a great life here – better than ever! But things turned out to the other way. I doubted myself, but moving to Canada was the right decision for us.

Yali, China
Sherry Archer's LINC 4-5 Class, Loyola, Belleville

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What I Like About Canada

Michele Dean's Beginner Class at Loyola, Belleville, created this chart to record their their feelings about Canada. By next year, I know we'll be seeing stories and poems from these students!

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Name

Country

What I Like About Canada

What I don't Like about Canada

Jhantab Abedi

Afghanistan

good healthcare

English

Parmjit Sandhu

India

water, good people

English

Ahmed Aram

Afghanistan

freedom

border police

Dawa Choedon

Tibet

peace, helpful government, free English class

English

Carolina Florez

Columbia

beautiful snow

English

Kyi Jin Oh

Korea

clean air

English

Moon Sook Shin

Korea

summer weather

waiting at the hospital

Sahar Sadik

Iraq

quiet

English

Yu Chang Wu

China

weather

food and English

Hua Hui Zhou (Joe)

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China

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people

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cold

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Carmela Valles, Executive Director of the New Canadians Centre (Peterborough)
(Photo by Svetlana Dylevskaya)

WHY HIRE IMMIGRANTS?

Because Skilled Immigrants can Help Canadian Companies do Business with the World

This was one of the key issues in a speech by Carmela Valles at the seminar "Why Hire Skilled Immigrants?", which was held at the Ramada Inn in Belleville on February 10, 2007. The seminar was organized by the East Central Ontario Training Board (ECOTB). Belleville newcomers, human resources executives and hiring managers participated in the seminar.


ECOTB is an organization dedicated to improving local labour force, economy and training systems. ECOTB helps local industries, communities, businesses and people prepare for the workplace of the future. You can find more information about ECOTB on the following website: www.focusontraining.com . w.focusontraining.com

Carmela Valles addressed the topic, "Why Hire Immigrants?", and gave insight into the challenges and opportunities facing recent immigrants and foreign-trained workers in Ontario. She also outlined some successful strategies for gaining entry to the workforce. The four key business drivers are:
- The Canadian-born workforce is shrinking and the demand for labour is growing.
- Skilled immigrants can help Canadian companies do business with the world.
- Skilled immigrants bring international expertise and experience.
- The local market is changing. Skilled immigrants within our workforce are a valuable resource for understanding product and service needs of ethno-specific markets.

Canadian employers are facing a shortage of highly educated and skilled candidates; skilled immigrants possess talents and accreditation in a variety of fields. Experience with skilled immigrants can give employers a more positive attitude towards international skills and education and a greater willingness to employ them. Canadian employers report a higher degree of enthusiasm for work and loyalty among skilled immigrants (IBM research).

To see the full version of Carmela's presentation, click on http://www.hireimmigrants.ca/workshops/Workshop_Why_Hire_Immigrants.ppt

Paul Zakos, manager of Prior Learning Assessment and Development at FNTI & Loyalist College, drew from his work with many adult workers across Canada and the world as they have attempted to gain empowerment in their job and career search. Empowerment through portfolio development and PLAR (Prior Learning Assessment&Recognition) was discussed. This is a "fresh" idea even for Canadians who are interested in searching for work successfully.

What is a portfolio? A portfolio is a record in a binder or on a computer file of a person's prior learning acquired by formal and/or informal learning. It guides individuals to bring together important evidence that explains the skills, knowledge and experience that they have acquired. A portfolio can be used to inform others about what a person knows and demonstrates what he/she can do.

Carlos Sebastian talked about his experience as a member of the Policy Roundtable for Mobilizing Professions and Trades in Ontario, the National Roundtable and years of social justice work.
Many newcomers to Canada deal with anger and frustration, particularly in their first year. Carlos gave some useful tips, which can help immigrants not only find a job, but also to integrate in the community. For example, he suggested they should work hard to learn English, be flexible and try to adapt, participate in community and social events to meet new people and make new friends. Immigrants also must be ready to learn and grow continuously, using different resources.

A panel of speakers also responded to questions from participants about the various employment issues facing newcomers and discussed training and education issues.

Svetlana Dylevskaya
Loyola, Belleville
LINC 6-7 class


Updated February 5, 2008


 
     
   
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